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You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had – Explain to them how you feel about what happened – Let them know what actions you would like them to take

You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had – Explain to them how you feel about what happened – Let them know what actions you would like them to take n6Keg

Hello Mr. Smith, Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about recent stay at Sheraton Hotel, Markham from May 05th to 8th, 2021. During my stay, I had to face major issues with the Housekeeping and Frond Desk. When I reached the Desk to check in, I was told that my reservation is been cancelled due to overbooking. After a long discussion with manager on duty, eventually I was given room. Then I found that room is not been cleaned properly, dirty sheets and floor etc. I am very disappointed to with such behavior. I currently hold the optimum level of loyalty program ( Gold Status) still I had to face such problems. I was recommended your property and that is way I made my reservation, as well as I don’t expect these things from such a prestigious Brand. Due to my negative experience, I am expecting to get my refund for the same stay, as my entire stay was ruined because of a simple missmanagement. Kindly look into the matter on a urgent basis. I look forward to a positive and early response. Regards Rishi Saxena

Hello Mr. Smith,

Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about recent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
 at Sheraton Hotel, Markham from May 05th to 8th, 2021. During my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
, I had to face major issues with the Housekeeping and Frond Desk.

When I reached the Desk to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 in, I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that my reservation is been
 cancelled due to overbooking. After a long discussion with manager on duty, eventually
 I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 room. Then I found that room is not been cleaned
properly
, dirty sheets and floor etc. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed to with such behavior. I currently
 hold the optimum level of loyalty program Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
Gold Status) still
 I had to face such problems.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was recommended
 your property and that is
 way I made my reservation, as well
 as I don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 these things from such a prestigious Brand. Due to my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 experience, I am expecting to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my refund for the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
, as my entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
was ruined
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of a simple Possible spelling mistake found.mismanagementmiss management
missmanagement
.

Kindly look into the matter on Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 urgent basis. I look forward to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and early response.

Regards

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Rishi
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Saxena