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You recently purchased an item online but you are not happy with it. write an email of complaint to the manager of the website. Say what you bought. Why are you not happy with it and what action you want them to take.

You recently purchased an item online but you are not happy with it. write an email of complaint to the manager of the website. Say what you bought. Why are you not happy with it and what action you want them to take. 7Lg1X

DEAR Sir/Madam, I am Shilpa and I am writing this letter to complain about a recent purchase I made on your online web portal with the reference XYZ, dated 10 September 2021. I bought a pair of shoes for my daughter for the size 8. However, when my daughter tried both the shoes, she was not comfortable walking as the shoe fit was different than what I ordered. This disappointed my daughter and made me upset. I would request you to consider a replacement of the shoes with the right size mentioned earlier. Also, it would be great if you can tighten the quality checks at your end before the product is shipped to customers. I am expecting a quick action and priority shipping so that I can arrange the shoes for my daughter's school day program, Looking forward for your response, Yours faithfully, Roy.

DEAR Sir/Madam,

I am Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Shilpa, and
Shilpa and
 I am writing this letter to complain about a recent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 I made on your online web portal with the reference XYZ, dated 10 September 2021.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a pair of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
 for my daughter for the size 8. However
, when my daughter tried both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
, she was not comfortable walking as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoe
 fit was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Did you mean 'different "from"? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.from
than
 what I ordered. This disappointed my daughter and made me upset.

I would request you to consider a replacement of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
 with the right size mentioned earlier. Also
, it would be great if you can tighten the quality This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
checks
 at your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the product is shipped
 to customers.

I am expecting a quick action and priority shipping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can arrange the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
 for my daughter's school day program,

Looking forward for your response,

Yours faithfully
,

Roy. 