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You recently purchased an item online but you are not happy with it. write an email of complaint to the manager of the website. Say what you bought. Why are you not happy with it and what action you want them to take.

You recently purchased an item online but you are not happy with it. write an email of complaint to the manager of the website. Say what you bought. Why are you not happy with it and what action you want them to take. 7Lg1X
DEAR Sir/Madam, I am Shilpa and I am writing this letter to complain about a recent purchase I made on your online web portal with the reference XYZ, dated 10 September 2021. I bought a pair of shoes for my daughter for the size 8. However, when my daughter tried both the shoes, she was not comfortable walking as the shoe fit was different than what I ordered. This disappointed my daughter and made me upset. I would request you to consider a replacement of the shoes with the right size mentioned earlier. Also, it would be great if you can tighten the quality checks at your end before the product is shipped to customers. I am expecting a quick action and priority shipping so that I can arrange the shoes for my daughter's school day program, Looking forward for your response, Yours faithfully, Roy.
DEAR Sir/Madam,

I am
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Shilpa and
I am writing this letter to complain about a recent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
I made on your online web portal with the reference XYZ, dated 10 September 2021.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a pair of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
for my daughter for the size 8.
However
, when my daughter tried both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
, she was not comfortable walking as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoe
fit was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
Did you mean 'different "from"? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
than
what I ordered. This disappointed my daughter and made me upset.

I would request you to consider a replacement of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
with the right size mentioned earlier.
Also
, it would be great if you can tighten the quality
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checks
at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the product
is shipped
to customers.

I am expecting a quick action and priority shipping
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can arrange the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
for my daughter's school day program,

Looking forward for your response,

Yours
faithfully
,

Roy.
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IELTS letter You recently purchased an item online but you are not happy with it. write an email of complaint to the manager of the website. Say what you bought. Why are you not happy with it and what action you want them to take.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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