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Write a letter to your international friend whom you never met before

Write a letter to your international friend whom you never met before nEW37
When I know I am one of 40 student get scholarships from Switzerland'school, I felt extremely happy and emotion due to the fact that become an intenational student, come and work in Switzerland is my dream when I at the age 15. My name is Minh Anh, and my full name is Nguyen Minh Anh. 3 years ago, I just a normal student, do not have big achievements or anything highlights. I dicided to become a international when I see Zurrich city, the peaceful scenery and the development of travles and hotels in this country. Switzerland become my factorize to learn English and German. You never know that before I was extremely lazy, bad at English and want to gave up learnt German. Furthermore, in that time I have depression consequently I do not want to talk or do anything due to the fact that I failed college. However, with tiktok and your letter, I know about Swiss and I can get over depression. You may be do not know who I am but I know who you are. I write this letter to send a cenemoniously apprecition for you. I really want we can become bestfriend when I come to Zurrich.
When I
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I am one of 40
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student
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scholarships from Switzerland'school, I felt
extremely
happy and emotion due to the fact that
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become
an
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intenational
student,
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come
and work in Switzerland is my dream when I at the age 15. My name is
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Minh
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Anh
, and my full name is Nguyen
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Minh
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Anh
. 3 years ago, I
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just
a normal student, do not have
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big
achievements or anything highlights. I
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dicided
to
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become
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a
international when I
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see
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Zurrich
city, the peaceful scenery and the development of
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travles
and hotels in this country. Switzerland
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become
my factorize to learn English and German. You never
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know
that
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before
I was
extremely
lazy,
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bad
at English and want to
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gave
up
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learnt
German.
Furthermore
, in that time I have depression
consequently
I do not want to talk or do anything due to the fact that I failed college.
However
, with
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tiktok
and your letter, I
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know
about Swiss and I can
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get
over depression. You
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may be
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do
not
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know
who I am
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but
I
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know
who you are.

I write this letter to
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send
a
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cenemoniously
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apprecition
for you. I
really
want we can
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bestfriend
when I
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come
to
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Zurrich
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your international friend whom you never met before

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  American English
2 paragraphs
202 words
5.5
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