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To apologise somebody when i made the mistake

To apologise somebody when i made the mistake Q5Ab1
Dear Mr. Andrea, Thank you for taking the time to share your feedback. While we wish you had a better experience, it is feedback like this that we learn from and use to improve. We work hard to deliver an exceptional guest experience. We are really sorry to read what you experience during your stay. If you give us a chance to earn back your trust, I can assure you that we will do our best to give you the great hotel experience that so many of our guests have grown so fond of. I wish nothing but the best for you. Best Regards,
Dear Mr. Andrea, Thank you for taking the time to share your feedback. While we wish you had a better
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experience
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use to
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improve
. We work
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hard
to deliver an exceptional guest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
. We are
really
sorry to read what you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
during your stay. If you give us a chance to earn back your trust, I can assure you that we will do our best to give you the great hotel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
that
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so
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many
of our guests have grown
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so
fond of. I wish nothing
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but
the best for you. Best Regards,
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IELTS letter To apologise somebody when i made the mistake

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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