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introduce regarding my self

introduce regarding my self nEWYn

hi guys. My name is Minh Anh and my full name is Nguyen Minh Anh. At this point I am living with my family in Huu Lung town. I am 15 years old and I am a high school student. My family has 5 people: my parents, my elder sister, my younger brother and I. My father is not a breadwinner, he also do every household chores when my mother takes responsibitily for household finances. My sister now is learning and working in Vin Pearl Lang Son Viet Nam so I become eldest child in my family. I must do too much work to minimize housework that my parents have to do. Talk more about place where I am living I can also say It is so wonderful and I adore my hometown so much.

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 guys. My name is Possible spelling mistake found.MindMineMiniMinMintMing
Minh
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 and my full name is Nguyen Possible spelling mistake found.MindMineMiniMinMintMing
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Anh
. At this point I am living with my family in Possible spelling mistake found.HubHutHueHUDHuiHug
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 Lung town. I am 15 years Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).old, and
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 I am a high school student. My family has 5 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
: my parents, my elder sister, my younger brother and I. My father is not a breadwinner, he also
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "does", "did".doesdid
do
 every household chores when my mother takes Possible spelling mistake found.responsibility
responsibitily
 for household finances. My sister This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 is learning and working in Possible spelling mistake found.VINInWinViaVanBin
Vin
 Pearl Lang Son Possible spelling mistake found.ViewDietVainVieVetVied
Viet
 Nam This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I become A determiner is probably missing here: "the eldest".the eldest
eldest
 child in my family. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do too much work to minimize housework that my parents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do. Talk more about place where I am living I can also
 say It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 wonderful and I adore my hometown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much. 