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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotel. In their feeback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotel. In their feeback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future. 32pY
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express gratitude for your team’s efforts in well-organizing my company’s all-day meeting event and forward their feedback about the dissatisfaction with food arrangements. The meeting’s audience was very much pleased with the ambience of the hotel and were quite satisfied with the ample parking space provided. Moreover, they were also impressed by how well the quality of audio system was maintained during the entire session. However, the participants were disappointed by the food options provided. We were offered with only two vegetarian options which to be quite honest are not full meals for such long hour sessions, leaving them hungry during the second half of the event. Additionally, a few sections of participants felt the spice levels of food were beyond their tolerance limits. Anyhow, apart from food, my company had a smooth and wonderful event, and I cannot thank you enough for providing all support for making it a success. My only suggestion for improvement would be to provide an equal share of vegetarian and non-vegetarian dishes as well as prepare these dishes considering a spice level that is suitable for each event participant. I look forward to collaborating with your management for my company’s future endeavors. Yours faithfully, Angela.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express gratitude for your team’s efforts in well-organizing my
company
’s all-day meeting
event
and forward their feedback about the dissatisfaction with
food
arrangements.

The meeting’s audience was
very
much
pleased
with the ambience of the hotel and were quite satisfied with the ample parking space provided.
Moreover
, they were
also
impressed by how well the quality of audio system
was maintained
during the entire session.

However
, the participants
were disappointed
by the
food
options provided. We
were offered
with
only
two vegetarian options which to be quite honest are not full meals for such long hour sessions, leaving them hungry during the second half of the
event
.
Additionally
, a few sections of participants felt the spice levels of
food
were beyond their tolerance limits.

Anyhow, apart from
food
, my
company
had a smooth and wonderful
event
, and I cannot thank you
enough
for providing all support for making it a success. My
only
suggestion for improvement would be to provide an equal share of vegetarian and non-vegetarian dishes
as well
as prepare these dishes considering a spice level
that is
suitable for each
event
participant.

I look forward to collaborating with your management for my
company
’s future endeavors.

Yours
faithfully
,

Angela.
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IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotel. In their feeback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.

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