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You have seen an advertisement for a part time work in a hotel for weekends. Write a letter to the manager and in your letter introduce yourself, ask what work involves and ask for other relevant details.

You have seen an advertisement for a part time work in a hotel for weekends. Write a letter to the manager and in your letter introduce yourself, ask what work involves and ask for other relevant details. 7QqY
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for a part-time work in your hotal "Ramada". Couple of days ago, I saw the newspaper advertise of an Assistant Manager require for your hotel. I am Rinkal Makasana. I have pursuing Master of Business Administration at Boston university which is one of the best university. In additional to, I have completed one year Diploma in Hotel management. I spend 20 hours for weekends in this Job. I have experienced as achief waiter hence Its also beneficial for us. Moreover, your restaurant is in the vicinity to my campus thus, it would be convenient for me. I have attached my resume, other qualification certificate and experience certificate. You have require Sincere candidate I would asurre that I have diligently do my work. You know about me. I devote in my C. V to referance number my college principal So contact him. I am waiting for your positive and prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Rinkal Makasana
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apply for a part-time work in your
hotal
"
Ramada
"
. Couple of days ago, I
saw
the newspaper advertise of an Assistant Manager require for your hotel.

I am
Rinkal
Makasana
. I have pursuing Master of Business Administration at Boston university which is one of the best university. In additional to, I have completed one year Diploma in Hotel management.

I spend 20 hours for weekends in this Job. I have experienced as
achief
waiter
hence
Its
also
beneficial for us.
Moreover
, your restaurant is in the vicinity to my campus
thus
, it would be convenient for me.

I have attached my resume, other qualification certificate and experience certificate. You have
require
Sincere candidate I would
asurre
that I have
diligently
do
my work. You know about me. I devote in my C. V to
referance
number my college principal
So
contact him.

I am waiting for your
positive
and prompt reply.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Rinkal
Makasana
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a part time work in a hotel for weekends. Write a letter to the manager and in your letter introduce yourself, ask what work involves and ask for other relevant details.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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