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You have recently started work in a new company

You have recently started work in a new company 5pQP
Dear Roxy, I hope you're doing well. It's been a while since we get in touch. I'm writing to let you know that I already started working with a new company and I really like it. First of all, I'm very sorry for not telling you about this sooner. The reason is, I'm unhappy with the job I have previously. Working for long hours were not allowing me to get some time for myself. Also, there was no hope of getting a promotion or raise. Eventhough, I worked hard and efficiently. As this was de-motivating me, I decided to quit the job and look for a better work opportunity. Fortunately, I got a job offer at Tim Hortons- this is a different sector from my previous work field, which is also great, as this was related to my course. Nevertheless, my new job brought me benefits such as a next-level position and raise in my compensation. The work environment is quite friendly and energetic. Also, I have exciting news to share with you. My sister were finally migrating to Canada next month and my family are planning to have a farewell party in my apartment next weekend. Since you are my best friend, my family is inviting you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Harold
Dear Roxy,

I hope you're doing well. It's been a while since we
get
in touch. I'm writing to
let
you know that I already
started
working with a new
company
and I
really
like it.

First of all
, I'm
very
sorry for not telling you about this sooner. The reason is, I'm unhappy with the
job
I have previously. Working for long hours were not allowing me to
get
some
time for myself.
Also
, there was no hope of getting a promotion or raise.
Eventhough
, I worked
hard
and
efficiently
. As this was
de-motivating
me, I decided to quit the
job
and look for a better work opportunity.

Fortunately
, I
got
a
job
offer at Tim Hortons- this is a
different
sector from my previous work field, which is
also
great, as this
was related
to my course.
Nevertheless
, my new
job
brought me benefits such as a
next
-level position and raise in my compensation. The work environment is quite friendly and energetic.

Also
, I have exciting news to share with you. My sister were
finally
migrating to Canada
next
month and my family are planning to have a farewell party in my apartment
next
weekend. Since you are my best friend, my family is inviting you.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best regards, Harold
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IELTS letter You have recently started work in a new company

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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