Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer qdBP

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope my letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to you, to raise some concerns about my accommodation provided by the college. Currently, I am sharing the room with one student. The room has a single wardrobe, two beds and a desk with chair. I am facing a problem with the wardrobe as there is very less space to fit in all my clothes. There are two shelves and one hanging rod. One shelf is being used by my roommate hence it leaves me with only one shelf to accommodate my belongings. Futhermore, only one desk has been given to us in the room. This makes it difficult for us to study simultaneously. One has to wait for the other to finish in order to occupy the desk. During exams, the situation becomes worse, as we have plenty of assignments to complete and there is only one desk. I request you to kindly make provision to get me transferred to a room with two desks and a separate wardrobe for each student. Or if possible, please provide an additional wardrobe and desk in the room I am currently staying in. Your immediate attention to this matter is highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Madhurima Mitra Room No - 708

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope my letter finds you in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health. I am writing this letter to you, to raise This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 concerns about my accommodation provided by the college. Currently
, I am sharing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with one student. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 has a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
, two beds and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
 with chair. I am facing a problem with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 as there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 less space to fit in all my clothes. There are two shelves and one hanging rod. One shelf is being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by my roommate hence
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 me with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one shelf to accommodate my belongings.

Possible spelling mistake found.Furthermore
Futhermore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to us in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it difficult for us to study simultaneously
. One This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 wait for the other to finish in order to occupy the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
. During exams, the situation becomes worse, as we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of assignments to complete and there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one desk.

I request you to kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 provision to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 me transferred to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desks
 and a separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 for each student. Or if possible, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 provide an additional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 I am currently
 staying in. Your immediate attention to this matter is highly
 appreciated.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Manchuria
Madhurima
Possible spelling mistake found.MiraMitralMithra
Mitra


Room No Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 708