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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer qdBP
Dear Sir or Madam, I hope my letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to you, to raise some concerns about my accommodation provided by the college. Currently, I am sharing the room with one student. The room has a single wardrobe, two beds and a desk with chair. I am facing a problem with the wardrobe as there is very less space to fit in all my clothes. There are two shelves and one hanging rod. One shelf is being used by my roommate hence it leaves me with only one shelf to accommodate my belongings. Futhermore, only one desk has been given to us in the room. This makes it difficult for us to study simultaneously. One has to wait for the other to finish in order to occupy the desk. During exams, the situation becomes worse, as we have plenty of assignments to complete and there is only one desk. I request you to kindly make provision to get me transferred to a room with two desks and a separate wardrobe for each student. Or if possible, please provide an additional wardrobe and desk in the room I am currently staying in. Your immediate attention to this matter is highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Madhurima Mitra Room No - 708
Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope my letter finds you in
good
health. I am writing this letter to you, to raise
some
concerns about my accommodation provided by the college.
Currently
, I am sharing the
room
with one student. The
room
has a single
wardrobe
, two beds and a
desk
with chair. I am facing a problem with the
wardrobe
as there is
very
less space to fit in all my clothes. There are two shelves and one hanging rod. One shelf is being
used
by my roommate
hence
it
leaves
me with
only
one shelf to accommodate my belongings.

Futhermore
,
only
one
desk
has been
given
to us in the
room
. This
makes
it difficult for us to study
simultaneously
. One
has to
wait for the other to finish in order to occupy the
desk
. During exams, the situation becomes worse, as we have
plenty
of assignments to complete and there is
only
one desk.

I request you to kindly
make
provision to
get
me transferred to a
room
with two
desks
and a separate
wardrobe
for each student. Or if possible,
please
provide an additional
wardrobe
and
desk
in the
room
I am
currently
staying in. Your immediate attention to this matter is
highly
appreciated.

Yours
faithfully
,

Madhurima
Mitra


Room No
-
708
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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  American English
6 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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