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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there p3GD
Hi John, I hope you're doing well & staying safe with your family. I was really happy to hearing about you from your letter that, you're going to move to my city after a few months and I would like to inform you about the same that, you come without any hesitation as this place is same as your. There are few things where you've to take that before you start looking for the accommodation even, I'll help you to find and in case if you can't then you can stay with me until you search. In addition, you bring your all identity proof such as passport or license etc. and based on that you can get your transportation pass and book your house. Hence you can turn in the city easily, since the metro is very comfortable here with all the information about the route and their timings. Moreover, it's the best way to meet the people in this city as it's the fastest transportation mode to reach any part of this city. If you have any doubts or anything ask about this city, please let me know by my cell. I'll look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours. Jayesh.
Hi John,

I hope you're doing well & staying safe with your family. I was
really
happy to hearing about you from your letter that, you're going to
move
to my city after a few months and I would like to inform you about the same that, you
come
without any hesitation as this place is same as your. There are few things where you've to take that
before
you
start
looking for the accommodation even, I'll
help you to find
and in case if you can't then you can stay with me until you search.

In addition
, you bring your all identity proof such as passport or license etc. and based on that you can
get
your transportation pass and book your
house
.
Hence
you can turn in the city
easily
, since the metro is
very
comfortable here with all the information about the route and their timings.
Moreover
, it's the best way to
meet
the
people
in this city as it's the fastest transportation mode to reach any part of this city.

If you have any doubts or anything ask about this city,
please
let
me know by my cell. I'll look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours.

Jayesh
.
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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