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A friend agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties.

A friend agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties. J9A5
Dear Shawi, Thanks for agreeing to help. Here is some useful information which should help you take care of my house and my pet while I'm away. Firstly, should you need to get in touch, my contact details are as follows. You can call me anytime on 09213152473, you could also message me on Facebook Messenger as I am usually online all the time, or you could send me an email at roxanneescano25@gmail. com. In order to look after my dog Chichi, you will need to feed her thrice a day, in the morning, afternoon and the evening. The food is located on the top of her cage and just put two cups on her bowl. Her water bowl needs to be kept filled up all the time as she drinks a lot and it would be great if you could also walk her outside if you get a chance. There are few other chores that need completing if you don't mind. So could you please wash the dog cage everyday to remove the poops and pee of my dog. The plants outside could also do with a water if you get time. Thanks so much for your help. Kind regards, Roxy
Dear
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Shawi
,

Thanks for agreeing to
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help
. Here is
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some
useful information which should
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help
you take care of my
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house
and my pet while I'm away.

Firstly
, should you
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need
to
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get
in touch, my contact
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details
are as follows. You can call me anytime on 09213152473, you could
also
message me on Facebook Messenger as I am
usually
online all the time, or you could
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send me an email
at roxanneescano25@gmail.
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com
.

In order to look after my dog Chichi, you will
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need
to feed her thrice a day, in the morning, afternoon and the evening. The food
is located
on the top of her cage and
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just
put two cups on her bowl. Her water bowl
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needs
to be
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kept
filled up all the time as she drinks a lot and it would be great if you could
also
walk her outside if you
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get
a chance.

There are few other chores that
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need
completing if you don't mind.
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So
could you
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please
wash the dog cage
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everyday
to remove the
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poops
and pee of my dog. The plants outside could
also
do with a water if you
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get
time.

Thanks
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so
much for your
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help
.

Kind regards, Roxy
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IELTS letter A friend agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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