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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. v. 2

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. v. 2 qVRX5
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to let you know about that we organized all meetings in your hotel and you provided good service for all my participants. However, I have received some comments on your foods service which are provided during all day meetings. Let me explain a situation in full detail. Last weeks, we were placed all meetings in your hotel. Your hotel was very beautiful and spacious. You had a large conference hall. This hall was necessary for meeting specially when you had a huge number of participants or members. Moreover, all hotel services were fast except food service. Your hotel food was stale and no tasty. My participants told me, lunch was not good and they did not like your food service. Your chef was not experts in making a food. Food was not cooked properly in a accurate way. As a results, we did not chewing a food properly. Your hotel is highly expensive and I suggested you, hiring a amateur chef and gives awesome and delicious food. I hope you give a concentration on them. Thank you, Yours faithfully, 456
Dear Sir,

I am writing a letter to
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let
you know about that we organized all meetings in your
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hotel
and you provided
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good
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service
for all my participants.
However
, I have received
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some
comments on your
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foods
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service
which
are provided
during all day meetings.

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Let
me
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explain
a situation in full detail. Last weeks, we
were placed
all meetings in your
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hotel
. Your
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hotel
was
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very
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beautiful
and spacious. You had a large conference hall. This hall was necessary for meeting
specially
when you had a huge number of participants or members.
Moreover
, all
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hotel
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services
were
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fast
except
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food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. Your
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hotel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
was stale and no tasty. My participants
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told
me, lunch was not
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
good and
they did not like your
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food
service.

Your chef was not experts in making a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
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Food
was not cooked
properly
Consider replacing "in a accurate way" with the adverb for "accurate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a accurate way
. As
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a result" or simply "results"?
a results
, we did not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "chew"?
chewing
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
properly
. Your
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hotel
is
highly
expensive and I suggested you, hiring
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
amateur chef and gives awesome and delicious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. I hope you give a concentration on them.

Thank you, Yours
faithfully
, 456
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IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. v. 2

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  American English
5 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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