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You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You’ve not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter state your reason for writing, describe the problems and explain how you feel, propose a solution, and risk the landlord to take action.”

You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You’ve not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter state your reason for writing, describe the problems and explain how you feel, propose a solution, and risk the landlord to take action. ” 85LkV
Mr. Peter I am Sharron Rai, a student of Shells school in Brighton. I am sharing with other flatmates at one of your accommodation near school where we are facing problem of hot water since Sunday morning. I am writing this letter to inform you that though paying this hefty rent, me and my roommates have to face heating problem. Three months ago the worker of yours fixed the problem but this time it is not getting solved. I am feeling so low, as I have not taken the bath since morning and it is winter time at present, due to which using washroom is also becoming a tough task for me. It is my suggestion that you can contact the contract manager and can place a visit for the same so that this problem can be resolved permanently. I am sending a copy of this letter to community chairman as well as you for solution and it is the last time. If no serious actions are taken then forget my part of rent and I would register a complain to local police station. Yours sincerely Sharron Rai
Mr. Peter

I am Sharron
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Rai
, a student of Shells school in Brighton. I am sharing with other flatmates at one of your

accommodation near school where we are facing
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problem
of hot water since Sunday morning.

I am writing this letter to inform you that though paying this hefty rent, me and my roommates
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to


face heating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
. Three months ago the
Use "(worker)" if you mean to express an extreme with this adjective.
worker
of yours
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this time it is not

getting solved. I am feeling
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
low, as I have not taken the bath since morning and it is winter time at

present, due to which using washroom is
also
becoming a tough task for me. It is my suggestion that you

can contact the contract manager and can place a visit for the same
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
can
be resolved


permanently
.

I am sending a copy of this letter to community chairman
as well
as you for solution and it is the last

time. If no serious actions
are taken
then forget my part of rent and I would register a
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
to local

police station.

Yours
sincerely


Sharron
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Rai
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IELTS letter You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You’ve not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter state your reason for writing, describe the problems and explain how you feel, propose a solution, and risk the landlord to take action. ”

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