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Applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter Give details of job, explain why it is important to you , suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter Give details of job, explain why it is important to you, suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. GMJew
Dear Ms. Geeta, I am writing this letter to let you know that I am applying for my first job of Human Resource Executive in a very reputed multinational company named Tata Consultancy Services after completing my Masters of Business Administration and for that I really need a reference letter from your side to enlighten my skills into my resume. As you already know that this position means a lot to me because it will support my career growth as well as help my finances. I always dreamed of working in a professional environment where I get an opportunity to enhance my potential. The salary package includes medical benefits, allowances, paid leaves, incentives and bonus too. I would be very pleased if you can provide me a reference letter which acknowledge about my strength and powerful learning ability by describing about my great academic grades and interests towards extracurricular. Kindly provide me as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Shivani
Dear Ms.
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Geeta
,

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I am applying for my
first
job of Human Resource Executive in a
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very
reputed multinational
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company
named Tata Consultancy Services after completing my Masters of Business Administration and for that I
really
need a reference letter from your side to enlighten my
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skills
into my resume.

As you already know that this position means a lot to me
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because
it will support my career growth
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
my finances. I always dreamed of working in a professional environment where I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an opportunity to enhance my potential. The salary package includes medical benefits, allowances, paid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
, incentives and bonus too.

I would be
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
if you can provide me a reference letter which acknowledge about my strength and powerful learning ability by describing about my great academic grades and interests towards extracurricular. Kindly provide me as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Shivani
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IELTS letter Applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter Give details of job, explain why it is important to you, suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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