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A friend from another countrt is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in Describe the public transport in your city Say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another countrt is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in Describe the public transport in your city Say how your friend can meet new people there r8636
Dear Hemant, I hope this letter finds you well, I have received your email yesterday, about your new job in Toronto as a Manager at Domino’s Pizza. I still remember our college days together and I know that you love to see new places. Here in Toronto, downtown would be a best place to live in as well as for leisure time. If you are thinking to moved in downtown then you must face lot of traffic, specially in weekdays. Public transport is not as good as London because most people use trams and there would be lots of cars on the same road, but underground trains would be best source for you to go to work. I know you are moving here, and you might need some friends. There are lots of online apps are available like Tinder, Meet-up and Dill-Mil. With these apps, you can meet many people, those are living in your area, also you could find your better half. My brother will come to receive you from the airport, see you soon. Best regards, Gurjit Singh.
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Hemant
,

I hope this letter finds you well, I have received your email yesterday, about your new job in Toronto as a Manager at Domino’s Pizza. I
still
remember our college days together and I know that you
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love
to
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see
new places. Here in Toronto, downtown would be
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a
best place to
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live
in
as well
as for leisure time.

If you are thinking to
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moved
in downtown then you
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must
face
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lot of
traffic,
specially
in weekdays. Public transport is not as
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good
as London
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because
most
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people
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use
trams and there would be lots of cars on the same road,
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but
underground trains would be best source for you to go to work.

I know you are moving here, and you might need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
friends. There are lots of online apps are available like Tinder,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Meet
-up and Dill-Mil. With these apps, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, those are living in your area,
also
you could find your better half.

My brother will
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come
to receive you from the airport,
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see
you
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soon
. Best regards,

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Gurjit
Singh.
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IELTS letter A friend from another countrt is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in Describe the public transport in your city Say how your friend can meet new people there

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180 words
6.0
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