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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. xmORy
Dear Mr Brown, I am writting this letter to request sometime off from work as i am preparing for a course. I found this cource important for me, because it will give lot of benefit in the work which I am doing on daily basis. I started this course few days back. by looking impotance of course I decided to complete it as soon as possible and I need 15 days completly to complete the course. I am requesting you to please provide 15 days off from work to prepare and complete this qualification. As soon as I will come back to work, I will be putting extra hours to complete previous task. This way I will be able to achieve both. By doing this qualification, I am going to completed my task in a better way. I got that the way which I am following now will be better and just because of that I will be able to deliver task before due date and this way I can delight client. I think by looking at benefit you are going to consider my 15 days leaves. Waiting for positive response. Yours sincerely, John Smith
Dear Mr Brown,

I am
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writting
this letter to request sometime off from
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work
as
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i
am preparing for a course.

I found this
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cource
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important
for me,
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because
it will give
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lot of
benefit in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
which I am doing on daily basis.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
this course few days back.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
by
looking
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impotance
of course
I decided to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
complete
it as
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soon
as possible and I need 15 days
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completly
to
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complete
the course. I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
provide 15 days off from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
to prepare and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
complete
this qualification. As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, I will be putting extra hours to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
complete
previous task. This way I will be able to achieve both.

By doing this qualification, I am going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "complete"
completed
my task in a better way. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
that the way which I am following
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
will be better and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of that I will be able to deliver task
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
due date and this way I can delight client.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
by looking at benefit you are going to consider my 15 days
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
. Waiting for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Smith
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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