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You recently ordered something online when the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter explain what you ordered and what was missing from you ordered and what was missing from your deliver. Explain the importance of the delivery. ask for a replacement item to be send.

You recently ordered something online when the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter explain what you ordered and what was missing from you ordered and what was missing from your deliver. Explain the importance of the delivery. ask for a replacement item to be send. JD7a
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that I recently ordered a pair of watches from your online eCommerce website. The order was placed on November 08th and the order number is 23456. I placed an order of Titan pair watches which i planned to gift my parents on their wedding anniversary day. I received only one watch instead of two. I ordered the same two week ahead to have them handy on my parents special day and surprise them with my gift. The shipment arrived to me on time, but I am really disappointed that one item is missing. Would you kindly check on the delivered item and confirm me back when I would receive the another pair of watch. Otherwise I would like a full refund of the product. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours Faithfully, Neenu Ajayan
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that I recently ordered a pair of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watches
from your online
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eCommerce
website. The order
was placed
on November 08th and the order number is 23456.

I placed an order of Titan pair
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watches
which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
planned to gift my parents on their wedding anniversary day. I received
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
instead
of two.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
ordered the same
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "two-week"
two week
ahead to have them handy on my parents special day and surprise them with my gift.

The shipment arrived to me on time,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I am
really
disappointed that one item is missing. Would you kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
on the delivered item and confirm me back when I would receive the another pair of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Otherwise
I would like a full refund of the product.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,
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Neenu
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Ajayan

IELTS letter You recently ordered something online when the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter explain what you ordered and what was missing from you ordered and what was missing from your deliver. Explain the importance of the delivery. ask for a replacement item to be send.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
147 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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