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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you P672

Dear John, How have you been & how are the kids. Hope Cathy has recovered from her infection that she contracted during our picnic. I know its been sometime since i returned back after visiting London, time flies. I am reminded of your excellent hospitality & warm family everyday since I came back, however it took me sometime to put pen to paper to express my heartfelt gratitude for your company. I would say that staying with you after a very long time was a delightful experience especially when it has come after a decade of our college days. The experience was incredible & all the reminiscing of our youth had a rejuvenating effect on my psyche. Trust me, with the daily pressures that we face, it was a solace. The time spent with your family & kids will be one of the best memories i had carried along with me back here & i am sure they will remain for a very long time! Excuse me for being greedy, but i would like to experience the same again, this time in my city. Please plan a vacation & stay with us, i promise to make the experience worthwhile for you. Do let me know when you will be able to visit so that i can plan the itinerary for you. Hope to create some amazing memories & earnestly looking forward to your visit. Best regards, Alan

Dear John,

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its
 been sometime since Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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Consider using "returned".returned
returned back
 after visiting London, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 flies. I am reminded
 of your excellent hospitality & warm family 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 since I came back, however
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company
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 would say that staying with you after a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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time
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experience
especially
 when it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 after a decade of our college days. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 was incredible & all the reminiscing of our youth had a rejuvenating effect on my psyche. Trust me, with the daily pressures that we face, it was a solace. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 spent with your family & kids will be one of the best memories Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had carried along with me back here & Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 am sure they will remain for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 long time!

Excuse me for being greedy, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 the same again, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 in my city. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 plan a vacation & stay with us, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 promise to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 worthwhile for you. Do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know when you will be able to visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can plan the itinerary for you. Hope to create This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 amazing memories & earnestly
 looking forward to your visit.

Best regards,

Alan