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You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter  apologize for the mistake  find out how important the book is to him/her  say what you will do  You should write at least 150 words.  Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.  you do NOT need to write your own address.

You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter  apologize for the mistake  find out how important the book is to him/her  say what you will do   Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.  you do NOT need to write your own address. VDjm
Dear Yuki, I hope you had a safe journey back to Japan, and that your family are all well. I am writing to say that I'm sorry for not giving you back the book 'English Grammar in Use' which I borrowed from you last term. You lent it to me just before the exams to help me prepare for them, and yesterday I found it under my bed. Please let me know straight away if you need this book for your studies right now, or whether you can manage without it. If you really need it, I can post it for you by airmail immediately. If not, do you mind if I send it by ordinary mail as it quite heavy? Or, if you prefer, I can send some money instead. Please let me know what you want me to do. I hope you enjoy the holiday.
Dear
Yuki
,

I hope you had a safe journey back to Japan, and that your family are all well.

I am writing to say that I'm sorry for not giving you back the book 'English Grammar

in
Use
' which I borrowed from you last term. You lent it to me
just
before
the exams

to
help
me prepare for them, and yesterday I found it under my bed.

Please
let
me know straight away if you need this book for your studies right
now
, or

whether you can manage without it.

If you
really
need it, I can post it for you by airmail immediately. If not, do you mind

if I
send
it by ordinary mail as
it
quite heavy? Or, if you prefer, I can
send
some


money
instead
.
Please
let
me know what you want me to do.

I hope you enjoy the holiday.
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IELTS letter You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter  apologize for the mistake  find out how important the book is to him/her  say what you will do   Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.  you do NOT need to write your own address.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
147 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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