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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take P6gE
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you about a occasion which happened with me and my reletives when we were in your restorant last Saturday in the evening. Usually we selebrate my birthday at home but this time we decided to did it your restorant on Sins street. But we were dissapointed about quality of service that we got. The weitress was so rude and we asked menu twice and she threw it on table after 20 minutes of our waiting. Aslo she tried to ignore our orders or had lack of attention for it because two dishes that we ordered we had not get nad we made this request again. This evening was not so bustling because I noticed that 50% of tables were empty and I decided this attitude to us based on some personal treats of your employee. I hope you can impact to quality of service and your service will have better quality than we had in last Saturday. However, about this weitress you can do somethin to motivate her If it possible maybe in this action she can work better. Your faithfully, John Dou
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you about
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a
occasion which happened
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with
me and my
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reletives
when we were in your
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restorant
last Saturday in the evening.
Usually
we
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selebrate
my birthday at home
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but
this time we decided to did it your
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restorant
on Sins street.
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But
we were
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dissapointed
about quality of service that we
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got
. The
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weitress
was
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so
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rude and
we asked menu
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twice and
she threw it on table after 20 minutes of our waiting.
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Aslo
she tried to
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ignore
our orders or had
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lack
of attention for it
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because
two dishes that we ordered we had not
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get
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nad
we made this request again. This evening was not
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so
bustling
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because
I noticed that 50% of tables were empty and I decided this attitude to us based on
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some
personal treats of your employee.

I hope you can impact to quality of service and your service will have better quality than we had in last Saturday.
However
, about this
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weitress
you can do
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somethin
to motivate her If
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it
possible maybe in this action she can work better.

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Your
faithfully
,

John
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Dou
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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