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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you 6jx0
Dear Sir or madam, I am an existing customer of your company & have been using your products for a long time without any complaints. My customer id is 10125, which should be available in your records. Last month, on 3rd of January, I had visited your showroom to get a new camera for myself. After a long search & some helpful advice from your sales agent, I finalised the Nikon 5300 and purchased it. When I went back & unboxed the camera, I noticed that the battery compartment was not closing as it should be as the clip keeping the battery lid in place was faulty. This caused the camera to have multiple restarts preventing me from taking good pictures. I would like your company to fix the problem when I bring the camera tomorrow to you as I will be visiting a nearby shop for some other purchase. Since I am on a tight schedule, I am writing to you in advance to prevent my time to be wasted. I hope this repair will permanently address the problem & I will not need to bring the camera again to you. Yours faithfully, Abdul Wasay
Dear Sir or madam,

I am an existing customer of your
company
& have been using your products for a long time without any complaints. My customer id is 10125, which should be available in your records.

Last month, on 3rd of January, I had visited your showroom to
get
a new
camera
for myself. After a long search &
some
helpful advice from your sales agent, I
finalised
the Nikon 5300 and
purchased
it. When I went back & unboxed the
camera
, I noticed that the battery compartment was not closing as it should be as the clip keeping the battery lid in place was faulty. This caused the
camera
to have multiple restarts preventing me from taking
good
pictures.

I would like your
company
to
fix
the problem when I bring the
camera
tomorrow to you as I will be visiting a nearby shop for
some
other
purchase
. Since I am on a tight schedule, I am writing to you in advance to
prevent
my time to
be wasted
.

I hope this repair will
permanently
address the problem & I will not need to bring the
camera
again to you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Abdul
Wasay
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IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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