Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company.

Dear sir, I am writing to compliment regarding your delivery system. I ordered a make-up kit on your shopping application but, unfortunately, I recieved this kit too late from ordered time. Actually, I went to my sister marriage so I ordered this kit because I wanted to give the kit as a gift on a marriage. But, I received this kit two days late and l feel so sad when I ordered on that time your application showed they sent to it right time. Yet, it came too late. Please check your application site and you will help me because I want you receive make-up kit and please you will refund my payment. Your truthfully, Raman
Dear sir, I am writing to compliment regarding your delivery system. I
ordered
a
make
-up
kit
on your shopping application
but
, unfortunately, I
recieved
this
kit
too late from
ordered
time. Actually, I went to my sister marriage
so
I
ordered
this
kit
because
I wanted to give the
kit
as a gift on a marriage.
But
, I received this
kit
two days late and l feel
so
sad when I
ordered
on that time your application
showed
they
sent
to it right time.
Yet
, it came too late.
Please
check
your application site and you will
help
me
because
I want you receive
make
-up
kit
and
please
you will refund my payment. Your
truthfully
,
Raman
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: