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You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company.

Dear sir, I am writing to compliment regarding your delivery system. I ordered a make-up kit on your shopping application but, unfortunately, I recieved this kit too late from ordered time. Actually, I went to my sister marriage so I ordered this kit because I wanted to give the kit as a gift on a marriage. But, I received this kit two days late and l feel so sad when I ordered on that time your application showed they sent to it right time. Yet, it came too late. Please check your application site and you will help me because I want you receive make-up kit and please you will refund my payment. Your truthfully, Raman
Dear sir, I am writing to compliment regarding your delivery system. I
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ordered
a
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make
-up
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kit
on your shopping application
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but
, unfortunately, I
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recieved
this
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kit
too late from
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ordered
time. Actually, I went to my sister marriage
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so
I
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ordered
this
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kit
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because
I wanted to give the
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kit
as a gift on a marriage.
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But
, I received this
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kit
two days late and l feel
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so
sad when I
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ordered
on that time your application
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showed
they
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sent
to it right time.
Yet
, it came too late.
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Please
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check
your application site and you will
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help
me
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because
I want you receive
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make
-up
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kit
and
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please
you will refund my payment. Your
truthfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Raman

IELTS letter You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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