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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to report lost property. It seems that I left my hand luggage on one of your flights. Last Wednesday, November 22nd, I flew from London to Vancouver on LB118 and took my hand luggage with me. I put it in the overhead bin. Unfortunately, after the long flight, I must have forgotten it on the plane. It's a blue hand luggage on wheels. It has one outside pockets and is locked with a small lock. I had all of my school work and books in it. I also had a new jacket in it. I had just received it as a gift from my grandmother in London. As you can imagine, these items are very important to me. Please let me know if you have my hand luggage and how I can get it back. Write to me at my return address or email: ana(at)feldman. ca I'm looking forward to your reply. Many thanks, Ana Feldman
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to report lost property. It seems that I
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on one of your flights. Last
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Wednesday, November 22nd
, I flew from London to Vancouver on LB118 and took my
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with me. I put it in the overhead bin. Unfortunately, after the long flight, I
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have forgotten it on the
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on wheels. It has one outside pockets and
is locked
with a
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lock. I had all of my school work and books in it. I
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had a new jacket in it.
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received it as a gift from my grandmother in London.

As you can imagine, these items are
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to me.
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and how I can
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it back. Write to me at my return address or email:
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I'm looking forward to your reply.

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thanks,

Ana Feldman
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IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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