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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Dear Anna, Thank you for your help when we will be away during this weekend. As you already know, we are renovating our house this summer, the furniture contractor will be at home when we are away. However, please call me anytime on my cellphone number if needed. Other than that, we will be not taking Jackey, our pet with us because his sickness. However, I will provide you his diet plan for a day and medicines given by a doctor. Jackey is so adorable pet, he will not annoy you. Also, he like to have bath on evening in our garden. Usually on every weekend, I used to do house cleaning and gardening. But for this weekend I already finished house cleaning as I am not intense to give you more stress about cleaning. However, I left with gardening, as I know you are in love with flowers. Cannot wait to see you on Thursday. Lots of love, Nidhi Patel
Dear Anna,

Thank you for your
help
when we will be away during this weekend. As you already know, we are renovating our
house
this summer, the furniture contractor will be at home when we are away.
However
,
please
call me anytime on my cellphone number if needed.

Other than that, we will be not taking
Jackey
, our pet with us
because
his sickness.
However
, I will provide you his diet plan for a day and medicines
given
by a doctor.
Jackey
is
so
adorable pet, he will not annoy you.
Also
, he like to have bath on evening in our garden.

Usually
on every weekend, I
used
to do
house
cleaning and gardening.
But
for this weekend I already finished
house
cleaning as I am not intense to give you more
stress
about cleaning.
However
, I
left
with gardening, as I know you are in
love
with flowers.

Cannot wait to
see
you on Thursday.

Lots of
love
,

Nidhi
Patel
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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