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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost

Dear Mr. Akram My name is Amr Omari, I'm a pharmacist working in research and development in pharmacuetical plant in Jordan. I glimpsed an online banner yesterday while reading the pharmacuetical industry electronic journal (PIEJ) regarding a bioequivelance seminar taking place in the magnifecint city of Istanbul, thus I am contacting you asking for more details regarding the seminar. I would like to know when is the seminar planned to start and for how many date, so I can arrange my work leave. Also it would be very helpful if you could provide me with the application fees; will it include the accomidation and the flight tickets? and in the case I would like to bring my spouse with me how can it be arranged? Also, will there be any post-seminar activities in the hours after the lectures ended? Moreover I will highly appreciate it if you could provide me with the seminar's selybus. One last question: will my participation in this seminar be acredit in my continiuos education program? and how many credit hours I will be awarded? Thanks a lot for giving time to answer my query and I'm looking foreward to meet you all at Istanbul soon Best regards Amr.
Dear Mr.
Akram


My name is
Amr
Omari
, I'm a pharmacist working in research and development in
pharmacuetical
plant in Jordan. I glimpsed an online banner yesterday while reading the
pharmacuetical
industry electronic journal (
PIEJ
) regarding a
bioequivelance
seminar taking place in the
magnifecint
city of Istanbul,
thus
I am contacting you asking for more
details
regarding the seminar.

I would like to know when is the seminar planned to
start
and for how
many date
,
so
I can arrange my work
leave
.
Also
it would be
very
helpful if you could provide me with the application fees; will it include the
accomidation
and the flight tickets?
and
in the case I would like to bring my spouse with me how can it
be arranged
?
Also
, will there be any post-seminar activities in the hours after the lectures ended?
Moreover
I will
highly
appreciate it if you could provide me with the seminar's
selybus
. One last question: will my participation in this seminar be
acredit
in my
continiuos
education program?
and
how
many
credit hours I will
be awarded
?

Thanks a lot for giving time to answer my query and I'm looking
foreward
to
meet
you all at Istanbul
soon


Best regards

Amr
.
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost

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