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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost

Dear Mr. Robinson, I am Sushanth Nair, working as a Software Engineer with TCS. I recently came across the information from a friend regarding a Data Analytics seminar to be conducted at Spain. I want to attend it and hence would like to know detailed information pertaining to dates, program topics, accomodation and cost of the seminar. Firstly, please let me know the month and the number of days the seminar is being planned for, as I would have to arrange my leaves accordingly. Also being a candidate from India, I will be really grateful if you could connect me with other participants from my country. Moreover, could you also also apprise me regarding the program topics and if there are any practical workshops for the application of topics which are taught. I also require information regarding the accomodation facilities provided or do I have to arrange for them on my own? Lastly, please let me know the total cost of the program. Awaiting your early response. Yours sincerely, Sushanth Nair
Dear Mr. Robinson,

I am
Sushanth
Nair, working as a Software Engineer with TCS. I recently came across the information from a friend regarding a Data Analytics seminar to
be conducted
at Spain.
I
want to attend it and
hence
would like to know detailed information pertaining to dates, program topics,
accomodation
and cost of the seminar.

Firstly
,
please
let
me know the month and the number of days the seminar is
being planned
for, as I would
have to
arrange my
leaves
accordingly
.
Also
being a candidate from India, I will be
really
grateful if you could connect me with other participants from my country.
Moreover
, could you
also
also
apprise me regarding the program topics and if there are any practical workshops for the application of topics which
are taught
.

I
also
require information regarding the
accomodation
facilities provided or do I
have to
arrange for them on my
own
?
Lastly
,
please
let
me know the total cost of the program.

Awaiting your early response.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sushanth
Nair
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost

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6.0
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