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You recently ordered something online. when the delivery came it was not complete.

You recently ordered something online. when the delivery came it was not complete. WMQK

Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing in connection with my recent purchase from your online store www. shoppersstop. com. Although the order was delivered ahead of the estimated delivery date, I found out unsatisfactory that my order was incomplete. I had placed an order for two pairs of Nike women's shoes and one pair of Nike men’s shoes in size 40, which was supposed to be a gift to my husband, under order no 123456 and is missing from the delivery. The reason mentioned in the note is that they do not have the requested size anymore. My husband’s birthday is in 5 days from now. I had, indeed, ordered these shoes because he very much likes the brand. This delivery is extremely important because I do not have enough time to buy another present for him. Furthermore, he will be extremely upset, if I do not gift him anything on his special day. Since it is a mistake on your side, I would like to have a replacement for the mentioned item. You can send me Men’s white Adidas sneakers in size 40, instead. Please make sure the order gets delivered before 10th May. I would be most grateful if you could give your immediate attention to this matter so that this issue gets resolved at everyone’s convenience. Yours Faithfully Nikita Chauhan

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Maam
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purchase
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. Although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
was delivered
 ahead of the estimated delivery date, I found out unsatisfactory that my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 was incomplete.

I had placed an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 for two pairs of Nike women's shoes and one pair of Nike This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
’s shoes in size 40, which was supposed
 to be a gift to my husband, under You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 no 123456 and is missing from the delivery. The reason mentioned in the note is that they do not have the requested size anymore.

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now
. I had, indeed
, ordered these shoes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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very
 much likes the brand. This delivery is extremely
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important
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because
 I do not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 another present for him. Furthermore
, he will be extremely
 upset, if I do not gift him anything on his special day.

Since it is a mistake on your side, I would like to have a replacement for the mentioned item. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
Men
’s white Adidas sneakers in size 40, instead
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 delivered This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 10th May.

I would be most grateful if you could give your immediate attention to this matter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that this issue This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 resolved at everyone’s convenience.

Yours Faithfully


Nikita Chauhan