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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in the job.

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in the job. EKnB
Dear Sir, I am Sabita Thapa. I am writing this letter in response to the job vacancy posted in today's Kathmandu Post. Currently, I am an undergraduate student at RatnaRajya University of the city and being an archeology student, I am interested for the position you have posted. I have visited the Museum and found a plethora of ancient sculptures and art works, which I found fascinating. I always wanted to study on archaic and start my research. I have knowledge of placing and secure storage of the ancient property. Moreover, I am well-known about the history of the materials, as I did research on them, so I can easily communicate the importance of them with the visitors. Perhaps, I am very good in communication as well. Since, I am free this summer and wanted a temporary placement, which matches your requirement as well, I want to join you. Looking forward hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Sabita Thapa.
Dear Sir,

I am
Sabita
Thapa
. I am writing this letter in response to the job vacancy posted in
today
's Kathmandu Post.
Currently
, I am an undergraduate student at
RatnaRajya
University of the city and being an archeology student, I am
interested for
the position you have posted.

I have visited the Museum and found a plethora of ancient sculptures and art works, which I found fascinating. I always wanted to study on archaic and
start
my research.
I
have knowledge of placing and secure storage of the ancient property.
Moreover
, I am well-known about the history of the materials, as I did research on them,
so
I can
easily
communicate the importance of them with the visitors. Perhaps, I am
very
good
in communication
as well
.

Since, I am free this summer and wanted a temporary placement, which matches your requirement
as well
, I want to
join
you.

Looking forward hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
Sabita
Thapa
.
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in the job.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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