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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in the job.

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in the job. L70K
Dear Sir, I am Miss Sabita, working in a private organization as a Clerk. I have seen an advertisement published in the newspaper on last Sunday about the vacancy available in City Museum Shop. I would like to apply for the above post as a part-time employee to work on holidays. I am a graduate in accounting and I have sound knowledge on customer care. Since I am currently involving in the business field. I could manage the position which will be taking over from your organizations. Also, I have a background on antique collection during my school days. I know the value of a museum and its advantages to the public. In this way, I could increase the number of customers attend to the museum everyday. I could ensure to implement a security system in the museum to protect the valuable item. The reason for applying this position is to involve in the interesting field of job. At the same time to utilize my holidays as meaningful. I would be thankful if you could kindly consider my application for the above mentioned post. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Sabita.
Dear Sir, I am Miss
Sabita
, working in a private organization as a Clerk. I have
seen
an advertisement published in the newspaper on last Sunday about the vacancy available in City
Museum
Shop. I would like to apply for the above post as a part-time employee to work on holidays.

I
am a graduate in accounting and I have sound knowledge on customer care.
Since
I am
currently
involving in the business field. I could manage the position which will be taking over from your organizations.
Also
, I have a background on antique collection during my school days. I know the value of a
museum
and its advantages to the public. In this way, I could increase the number of customers attend to the
museum
everyday
. I could ensure to implement a security system in the
museum
to protect the valuable item.

The reason for applying this position is to involve in the interesting field of job. At the same time to utilize my holidays as meaningful. I would be thankful if you could kindly consider my application for the above mentioned post.

Thank you. Yours
Sincerely
,
Sabita
.
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what experience and special skills you have, explain why you are interested in the job.

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  American English
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189 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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