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You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery. • Explain the importance of this delivery • Ask for a replacement item to be sent

You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery. • Explain the importance of this delivery • Ask for a replacement item to be sent QdOK
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you, and there is a missing item from the delivery which I ordered two days back through your online website. I ordered a three-line of jacket which is on a great deal. In the description, it was clearly mentioned that the jacket includes a hoodie. When I opened it the hoodie was missing from the package and got very much disappointed. I planned to gift this jacket for my wife’s birthday, and now It is not possible to gift this item on that day. I believe you must know how important it is? Since I am a regular customer, you should take care while packing up things properly. Hence, I am requesting to send a replacement for this item which you have delivered wrongly. Please find my order number below: The order number is 437984. I am waiting for your prompt reply. Thanks & Regards, Rejilesh Chandran.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you, and there is a missing item from the delivery which I ordered two days back through your online website. I ordered a three-line of jacket which is on a great deal. In the description, it was
clearly
mentioned that the jacket includes a hoodie. When I opened it the hoodie was missing from the package and
got
very
much disappointed.

I planned to gift this jacket for my wife’s birthday, and
now
It is not possible to gift this item on that day. I believe you
must
know how
important
it is? Since I am a regular customer, you should take care while packing up things
properly
.

Hence
, I am requesting to
send
a replacement for this item which you have delivered
wrongly
.
Please
find my order number below:

The order number is 437984. I am waiting for your prompt reply.

Thanks & Regards,

Rejilesh
Chandran
.
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IELTS letter You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery. • Explain the importance of this delivery • Ask for a replacement item to be sent

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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