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You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred write a letter to the landlord describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do .

You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred write a letter to the landlord describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do. 1DQG
I am your tenant from appartment number 26 malabar steer. I moved in with my family two weeks ago. I am writing this letter to apprise you about some problems that we are facing in the appartment. The tap in the bathrooms are leaking beacause of that my two year old niece has slipped. another problems is that shower is not working properly. lastly, the window are not closed enough. we have push the window hard to close it.
I am your tenant from
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appartment
number 26
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malabar
steer. I
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moved
in with my family two weeks ago.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to apprise you about
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some
problems that we are facing in the
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appartment
. The tap in the bathrooms are leaking
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beacause
of that my two year
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old
niece has slipped.
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another
problems
You should probably use: "are".
is
that shower is not working
properly
.
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lastly
, the window are not closed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
.
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we
have push the window
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to close it.
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IELTS letter You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred write a letter to the landlord describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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