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You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the book in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it. You should write at least 150 words.

You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the book in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it. 6DX8
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to request your consideration as I failed to return few books that I borrowed from our college Library. I have been a loyal member of this library since my enrollment to the college. For your kind information, I never overdue my books during my 2 years long engagement with the library. In contrary last week I had to visit my uncle who lives in Abc city. He was supposed to have his regular doctors appointment with me. I had couple of books that were due in 3 days and expecting to return by next day. To my surprise when I reached his house he was in severe pain and had to be taken to Emergency unit of near by hospital. He is living all by himself need my assistance as he went through a minor operation in his abdomen. In these circumstances I would like you to consider me for the delays and waive me from the applicable fines. I will be able to visit the library on 5th of March and return those books. Yet, I would have been 1 week over due at that point. I look forward for your kind consideration. I believe you will look kindly into the matter considering non-profit motive nature of our college administration. Yours faithfully, Pb
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to request your consideration as I failed to

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return
few
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books
that I borrowed from our college Library.

I have been a loyal member of this library since my enrollment to the college. For your kind information, I never overdue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
during my 2 years long engagement with the library. In contrary last week I had to visit my uncle who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in
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Abc
city. He
was supposed
to have his regular doctors appointment with me.

I had
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couple of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
that were due in 3 days and expecting to return by
next
day. To my surprise when I reached his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
he was in severe pain and had to
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be


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taken
to Emergency unit of
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
hospital. He is living all by himself
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need


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my
assistance as he went through a minor operation in his abdomen.

In these circumstances I would like you to consider me for the delays and waive

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
me
from the applicable fines. I will be able to visit the library on 5th of March and return those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
Yet
, I would have been 1 week over due at that point.

I look forward for your kind consideration. I believe you will look kindly
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
into


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the
matter considering non-profit motive nature of our college administration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Pb
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IELTS letter You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the book in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

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  American English
12 paragraphs
222 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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