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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her Dear Danica, How was your day, are there any changes in your place? it's been a year since we last see each other and I'm happy to hear again from you, by that way I have already read your letter about finding you a job. Actually, there is a local company here looking for a human resource management and I think you need to see for yourself because I know you already an expert on this line of job, and the requirements for this job is at least have 3 years experience and ready to employ immediately so you need to be here as soon as you received this letter. I also take their email address and telephone number for you to reach them. Don't forget to call me when you are here, my place is always open for you to crash on. Truly yours, Seth

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help
 in finding a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 in your country. You have heard about a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 in a local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 that might be suitable for him/her

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.Dania
Danica
, How was your day, are there any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in your place? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
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's been a year since we last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 each other and I'm happy to hear again from you, by that way I have already read your letter about finding you a job.

Actually, there is a local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 here looking for a human resource management and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 for yourself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I know you already an expert on this line of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
, and the requirements for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 is at least have 3 years experience and ready to employ immediately This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you need to be here as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as you received this letter. I also
 take their email address and telephone number for you to reach them.

Don't forget to call me when you are here, my place is always open for you to crash on.

Truly
 yours, Seth