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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her 8DVr
A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her Dear Danica, How was your day, are there any changes in your place? it's been a year since we last see each other and I'm happy to hear again from you, by that way I have already read your letter about finding you a job. Actually, there is a local company here looking for a human resource management and I think you need to see for yourself because I know you already an expert on this line of job, and the requirements for this job is at least have 3 years experience and ready to employ immediately so you need to be here as soon as you received this letter. I also take their email address and telephone number for you to reach them. Don't forget to call me when you are here, my place is always open for you to crash on. Truly yours, Seth
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in finding a
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in a local
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that might be suitable for him/her

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Danica
, How was your day, are there any
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in your place?
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each other and I'm happy to hear again from you, by that way I have already read your letter about finding you a job.

Actually, there is a local
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company
here looking for a human resource management and I
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you need to
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see
for yourself
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because
I know you already an expert on this line of
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job
, and the requirements for this
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job
is at least have 3 years experience and ready to employ immediately
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so
you need to be here as
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as you received this letter. I
also
take their email address and telephone number for you to reach them.

Don't forget to call me when you are here, my place is always open for you to crash on.

Truly
yours, Seth

IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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