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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there GgPo

Dear Dhwani, I was so pleased to hear that you are moving to Ottawa, so I am writing this letter with some tips that would be helpful. I would like to start with some neighborhoods that I think you would like. There are newly renovated apartments in downtown Ottawa, newly renovated houses in Kanata which are more suitable for families. Although, the most interesting part of city is Little Italy. The street itself is very popular in Ottawa. The interesting part about the street is that people from different kinds of culture live here. Some times every day is like a festival on the streets and they celebrate all of these festivals as a family. The second thing that I wanted to talk about is public transport. The bus system is very nice out here. I think buses go everywhere, even in some of the residential areas. You just need to buy a presto and pay the fees monthly. That will give you access to all buses and trains. I will also introduce you to some of my friends and you will meet new people at your workplace. There is a local show performance every month where you could meet new people. Anyway I can't wait till you get here. Kinds Regards, Sonal Patel

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get
 here.

Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "kind Regards".Kind Regards
Kinds Regards
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Sonal
 Patel