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Dear Emily, I am sorry I haven’t written for such a long time but I was very busy with my exams. How are you? I like your choice to be an actress. And I know that you are very talented and you’ll become a famous actress. As for my plans I always wanted to be a singer. You know that I love singing. But unfortunately I often have a sore throat, and the doctor said that it was impossible. So I decided to be a teacher of English. I study English and German and this is what I like as much as singing. To be ready for my future profession, firstly, I listen to English songs and watch English movies. Secondly, I learn words when I’m walking along the street or even cycling. But the most important thing is language practice. I try to speak to native speakers if I have such an opportunity wherever I am. If I want to be a successful teacher I have to be communicative. Moreover I must love children and love to work with them and, of course, I have to understand children’s behavior. Hope to hear from you soon. Drop me a line, please. And give my regards to your family. Best wishes, Anna

Dear Emily,

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very
 talented and you’ll become a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 actress.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 for my plans I always wanted to be a singer. You know that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
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But
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often
 have a sore throat, and the doctor said that it was impossible. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I decided to be a teacher of English. I study English and German and this is what I like as much as singing.

To be ready for my future profession, firstly
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watch
 English movies. Secondly
, I learn words when I’m walking along the street or even cycling. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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important
 thing is language practice. I try to speak to native speakers if I have such an opportunity wherever I am.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I want to be a successful teacher I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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Moreover
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must
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love
 children and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to work with them and, of course
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 understand children’s behavior.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Drop me a line, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
. And give my regards to your family.

Best wishes,

Anna