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2. A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her. Write a letter to your friend . In your letter. Say how you felt when you received the present. Describe what you like about it. Explain how you will use the present.

2. A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. Say how you felt when you received the present. Describe what you like about it. Explain how you will use the present. Vxwm

Dear Bob, Hope you are doing well. I’m writing to let you know that I have received the gift which you have sent from Canada. Firstly, I wasn’t expecting any parcel from overseas; however, today morning when the postman rang the bell and handed over the parcel, I was surprised, but after seeing the sender’s name, I was over moon and emotional as well, as you still remember my fondness on watch collections. Furthermore, I was looking for an analog wrist watch in the country where I live currently and even in my home country as well, but wasn’t successful to find anything close to it. This watch has a unique feature wherein the dial and date automatically glow during twilight. Moreover, it has a navigator and fitness tracker which is a rare feature in analog watch. Lastly, salient feature of the watch is irresistible, but these striking features of this precious gift is holding me for day-to-day use. It is used only on special occasions like anniversaries, festivals. Keep in touch. Best Regards, Prakash

Dear Bob,

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let
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sent
 from Canada.

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, I wasn’t expecting any parcel from overseas; however
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today morning
 when the postman rang the bell and handed over the parcel, I was surprised
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but
 after seeing the sender’s name, I was over moon and emotional as well
, as you still
 remember my fondness on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 collections.

Furthermore
, I was looking for an analog wrist You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 in the country where I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
currently
 and even in my home country as well
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 wasn’t successful to find anything close to it. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 has a unique You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtraitcomponentdetailelementitemaspect
feature
 wherein the dial and date automatically
 glow during twilight. Moreover
, it has a navigator and fitness tracker which is a rare You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtraitcomponentdetailelementitemaspect
feature
 in analog This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
.

Lastly
, salient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtraitcomponentdetailelementitemaspect
feature
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
watch
 is irresistible, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 these striking features of this precious gift is holding me for day-to-day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on special occasions like anniversaries, festivals.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch.

Best Regards,

Prakash