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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college byqW

Dear Sir, The objective of writing this letter is to let you know that I will take part in a training course at your college the next week. It is about six months advanced level Accounting course. I am planning to depart this week on Saturday, and most probably I will be arrived in Oslo in Sunday morning. Before I arrived, I just wanted to enquire a little information about accommodation, such as to my preference I would like to go for one bedroom dormitory with shared kitchen as this kind of place usually most appeals to me because price is reasonable. Besides it, I would really appreciate it, if you could give me some information about whether the college is located in walking distance from the dormitory or not. If not what kind of transportation I am going to take from the place where I am going to stay to the college and how much money I am expected to pay for it. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much. Yours Sincerely, Ughur Gasimov

Dear Sir,

The objective of writing this letter is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in a training course at your college the next
 week. It is about six months advanced level Accounting course. I am planning to depart this week on Saturday, and most probably
 I will be arrived
 in Oslo in Sunday morning.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 I arrived, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 wanted to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 information about accommodation, such as to my preference I would like to go for one bedroom dormitory with shared kitchen as this kind of place usually
 most appeals to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 price is reasonable.

Besides
 it, I would really
 appreciate it, if you could give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about whether the college is located
 in walking distance from the dormitory or not. If not what kind of transportation I am going to take from the place where I am going to stay to the college and how much money I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to pay for it.

I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much.

Yours Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Uighur
Ughur
Possible spelling mistake found.Asimov
Gasimov