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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take lO61
Dear Sir, You would recall that me and my family had a dinner at your restaurant on 17th January 2021. However, I was extremely disappointed and dissatisfied with the cuisine as well as with the service from your staff. I am writing this letter to inform you about the reasons for dissatisfaction. Our family gathered at your eatery to celebrate the Birthday of my son. I had scheduled appointment and booked for 10 seats for this event and gave my priorities regarding style of cuisine, seating arrangements and timing. Since, we arrived in sharp time at the hotel you failed to keep the promises and the party started late which was a huge inconvenience for many invitees. Moreover, cuisine served was not up to your normal standards. We ordered for Chinese, Indian and Western cuisine but unfortunately some dishes were missing. To conclude, I was insulted in front of my guests as the programme was an utter failure and I would like to get refund for my party within two weeks as it was a mistake from your end. I will be forced to take legal actions if you don't meet my demand. Yours Faithfully, Jaise
Dear Sir,

You would recall that me and my family
had a dinner
at your restaurant on 17th January 2021.
However
, I was
extremely
disappointed and dissatisfied with the
cuisine
as well
as with the service from your staff. I am writing this letter to inform you about the reasons for dissatisfaction.

Our family gathered at your eatery to celebrate the Birthday of my son. I had scheduled appointment and booked for 10 seats for this
event
and gave my priorities regarding style of
cuisine
, seating arrangements and timing. Since, we arrived in sharp time at the hotel you failed to
keep
the promises and the party
started
late which was a huge inconvenience for
many
invitees.
Moreover
,
cuisine
served was not up to your normal standards. We ordered for Chinese, Indian and Western
cuisine
but
unfortunately
some
dishes were missing.

To conclude
, I
was insulted
in front of my guests as the
programme
was an utter failure and I would like to
get
refund for my party within two weeks as it was a mistake from your
end
. I will
be forced
to take legal actions if you don't
meet
my demand.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Jaise
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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