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You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived, it was damaged. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that today I received the parcel. It is damage product from the Home Depot, Cambridge. I visited your website last week where I bought two products like the furniture and the office chair for my regular purpose. First of all, the furniture was shine and a new model that is very strong. It comes with a brown colour to match my drawing-room. Moreover, the office chair is very comfortable and comes with a blue colour. Unfortunately, I received both items damage that I am not able to fix and put to my main room. So, I do not know what to do with this stuff. Finally, I decide that If you provide me with the exchange return latter. It would be more beneficial to me. Also, as I understand 30 days return or exchange policy. Therefore, provide me new return bar code that delivery man person will bring that stuff from my home. I would appreciate it if you put more priority to my queries. I will wait for your response. Yours faithfully, John Wick

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 I received the parcel. It is damage product from the Home Depot, Cambridge.

I visited your website last It is better to use ‘week’ with the time-relative pronoun ‘when’: “week when”. (Alternatively, use ‘in/on which’)week when
week where
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 two products like the furniture and the office chair for my regular purpose. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, the furniture was shine and a new model that is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 strong. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with a brown Possible spelling mistake. ‘colour’ is British English.color
colour
 to match my drawing-room. Moreover
, the office chair is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 comfortable and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with a blue Possible spelling mistake. ‘colour’ is British English.color
colour
.

Unfortunately, I received both items damage that I am not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 and put to my main room. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I do not know what to do with this stuff.

Finally
, I decide that If you provide me with the exchange return latter. It would be more beneficial to me. Also
, as I understand 30 days return or exchange policy. Therefore
, provide me new return bar code that delivery This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 person will bring that stuff from my home.

I would appreciate it if you put more priority to my queries. I will wait for your response.

Yours faithfully
,

John Wick