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Your local council is considering closing a local sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the council explaining: Give details as to how you, your family or friends utilize this center Explain why the center is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on the local community if the center closes

Dear Sir or Madam, This well considered letter regards your erroneous thoughts on shutting our beloved sports and leisure center. First, the club comes with a longstanding history of association with our family. My parents, being a diabetic and obesity patient regularly utilize the gym facility available in the center. Not only my parents but also my daughter and her swim championship team would be affected by this as they practice in the club for their upcoming swim championship tournament. As you know that this center maintains the healthy relationship amongst the locals and your shutting plan would only mean to alter this relationship. Also, the club remains the only indoor activity during the winter season as the temperature in the region goes way below for any outdoor activity. Among the several possible effects if the club doors were to close, one major and equally important effect would give rise to the obesity ratio within the local community as our region falls under the obesity epidemic zone. Along with the obesity issue, locals would remain with no options for any sports activities and might prefer to leave the locality which would only increase the living costs. Hope you would keep in mind all the above concerns while considering the closure of the sports and leisure facility. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Will Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

This well considered letter regards your erroneous thoughts on shutting our beloved sports and leisure center.

First
, the
club
comes
with a longstanding history of association with our family. My parents, being a diabetic and obesity patient
regularly
utilize the gym facility available in the center. Not
only
my parents
but
also
my daughter and her swim championship team would be
affected
by this as they practice in the
club
for their upcoming swim championship tournament.

As you know that this center maintains the healthy relationship amongst the locals and your shutting plan would
only
mean to alter this relationship.
Also
, the
club
remains the
only
indoor activity during
the winter season
as the temperature in the region goes way below for any outdoor activity.

Among
the several possible effects if the
club
doors were to close, one major and
equally
important
effect would give rise to the obesity ratio within the local community as our region falls under the obesity epidemic zone. Along with the obesity issue, locals would remain with no options for any sports activities and might prefer to
leave
the locality which would
only
increase the living costs.

Hope you would
keep
in mind all the above concerns while considering the closure of the sports and leisure facility.

Thank you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Will Smith
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a local sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the council explaining: Give details as to how you, your family or friends utilize this center Explain why the center is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on the local community if the center closes

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