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Your local council is considering closing a local sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the council explaining: Give details as to how you, your family or friends utilize this center Explain why the center is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on the local community if the center closes

Dear Sir or Madam, This well considered letter regards your erroneous thought on shutting the doors of our regional sports and leisure facility. First, this gymnasium must remain open for the members of my family who reside as the longstanding community representatives. Both my mother and father anguish from diabetes and depend on the fitness center to lose weight and to combat the disease. Not only do my parents benefit from the center continued operation but also my daughter’s city championship swim team uses the pool for practice. As an additional point to reject closure, you should recall how the sports facility integrates the community. Due to our geographical weather, snow and ice subsist for around four months a year, and the center remains the only winter leisure activity option. Even more, a gymnasium embodies a meeting place for the community which promotes the connections and strengthens our neighborhood. If you proceed to cease sports facility operations, we will lose a treasured gym that negatively impacts all the residents. As you well know, we maintain an obesity epidemic in this area, and the gym closure will only increase the problems. Additionally, many citizens may consider relocating to the big city long with their spending money if you start taking away the amenities. Please take these points in mind when pondering the closing of the sports and leisure facility. With Regards, Will Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

This well considered letter regards your erroneous
thought
on shutting the doors of our regional
sports
and leisure facility.

First
, this gymnasium
must
remain open for the members of my family who reside as the longstanding community representatives. Both my mother and father anguish from diabetes and depend on the fitness center to lose weight and to combat the disease. Not
only
do my parents benefit from the center continued operation
but
also
my daughter’s city championship swim team
uses
the pool for practice.

As an additional point to reject closure, you should recall how the
sports
facility integrates the community. Due to our geographical weather, snow and ice subsist for around four months a year, and the center remains the
only
winter leisure activity option. Even more, a gymnasium embodies a meeting place for the community which promotes the connections and strengthens our neighborhood.

If you proceed to cease
sports
facility operations, we will lose a treasured gym that
negatively
impacts all the residents. As you well know, we maintain an obesity epidemic in this area, and the gym closure will
only
increase the problems.
Additionally
,
many
citizens may consider relocating to the
big
city long with their spending money if you
start
taking away the amenities.

Please
take these points in mind when pondering the closing of the
sports
and leisure facility.

With Regards,

Will Smith
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a local sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the council explaining: Give details as to how you, your family or friends utilize this center Explain why the center is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on the local community if the center closes

Letter
  American English
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6.5
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