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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear Alex, Firstly, thanks for giving your consent for taking care of my home and pet while I'm on vacation. I would be sharing few details for your comfort and ease. You can give me call any time on my mobile number as I did not change because of cheap roaming service in my holiday location. Also, you can reach me on my personal email address as I have an internet connection at my hotel room. Regarding pet, you don't need to worry much as enough food is already available in my living room. For food timings, you can provide meal two times a day. Also, it would be nice if you can take pet for walk on alternate days. Apart from taking care of pet, I would request if you can put some fruits in fridge which are lying on shelf. One more thing, Can you please switch of the light in my bedroom, which I didn't remember to turn off. Thanks for your quick support in this situation and please contact me for any query. Lots of love, Adeel
Dear Alex,

Firstly
, thanks for giving your consent for taking care of my home and pet while I'm on vacation. I would be sharing few
details
for your comfort and
ease
.

You can give me call any time on my mobile number as I did not
change
because
of
cheap
roaming service in my holiday location.
Also
, you can reach me on my personal email address as I have an internet connection at my hotel room.

Regarding pet, you don't need to worry much as
enough
food is already available in my living room. For food timings, you can provide meal two times a day.
Also
, it would be nice if you can take pet for walk on alternate days.

Apart from taking care of pet, I would request if you can put
some
fruits in fridge which are lying on shelf. One more thing, Can you
please
switch
of
the light in my bedroom, which I didn't remember to turn off.

Thanks for your quick support in this situation and
please
contact me for any query.

Lots of
love
,

Adeel
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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