Dear Sir or Madam,
Five days ago I ordered a headphone from your online store. I was excited when it arrived yesterday but very frustrated to find that the product was damaged. I am not sure if it got damaged during the shipment or was it a manufacturing flaw. In either case, I am hoping you will replace it with a fresh one.
In relation to the specifics of the order, I purchased this 'Sony MDR-V6 Over the Ear Headphones - Black' through your website called Computer Gadgets on August 18th using my PayPal account. The order number is 5487214 and I am attaching a copy of my receipt.
The issue with the headphone is that one swivel air cup was missing, and the play/pause button does not work. I am unable to use it. I’m sure this is either a manufacturing flaw or the product got damaged while shipment.
As a solution, and because I really like the model and functionality of this headphone, I am hoping that you will agree to send me another one for free. Otherwise, I would like a full refund and I will be contacting PayPal complaints if I do not hear back from you in regards to this within a week.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jenny Sahara
Dear Sir or Madam,
Five days ago I ordered a headphone from your online store. I  
was excited
 when it arrived yesterday  
but
  very
 frustrated to find that the product  
was damaged
. I am not sure if it  
got
 damaged during the shipment or was it a manufacturing flaw. In either case, I am hoping you will replace it with a fresh one.
In relation to the specifics of the order, I  
purchased
 this 'Sony MDR-V6 Over the Ear Headphones  
-
 Black' through your website called Computer Gadgets on August 18th using my PayPal account. The order number is  
5487214 and
 I am attaching a copy of my receipt.
The issue with the headphone is that one swivel air cup was missing, and the play/pause button does not work. I am unable to  
use
 it. I’m sure this is either a manufacturing flaw or the product  
got
 damaged while shipment.
As a solution, and  
because
 I  
really
 like the model and functionality of this headphone, I am hoping that you will  
agree
 to  
send
 me another one for free.  
Otherwise
, I would like a full refund and I will be contacting PayPal complaints if I do not hear back from you  
in regards to
 this within a week.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply  
soon
.
Yours  
faithfully
,
Jenny Sahara
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