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Dear Mr. Kevin, I am writing this to express my gratitude towards you for considering me in your organisation Infosys for Area manager. It was a pleasant surprise from your side for such an amazing offer. Unfortunately, I would not be able to join this because recently my organisation has given me promotion and salary appraisal. It will be not possible for me to join your organisation. However, I would like to recommend one of my friends David Smith as a strong potential candidate. He has 11 years experience of branch manager in Oracle international and has an exceptional communication and motivational skills. He is currently looking for job change and can be reached on his mobile number 9876542210. Thank you once again for your confidence in opportunity to work with with your organisation. I am sorry if I have caused you an inconvenience. Yours sincerely, Robert Dickson

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