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You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say Where and what were the problems? Explain how these problem affects the public. Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation.

You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say Where and what were the problems? Explain how these problem affects the public. Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation. PXDEB

Dear sir, I am writing this to inform you about some concerns regarding the public transportation service in our area. I am Tina Modi, a final year student in Gujarat University and living in Ognaj, Ahmedabad. The area is located on the outskirts of the city and recently developed. Therefore, there are very few option to commute to the main city especially in the morning time. Due to this, all the residence are dependent particularly on public bus service despite the local bus stop have only two buses for city route in addition the drivers take long to starts the trip. As a result, it is becoming difficult to everyone to catch a bus on time and employees and students often reach late to their jobs and colleges. I would like to suggest some ideas here to resolve this issue. Firstly, if the drivers could follow the proper time-table which is mentioned in the bus stop, than we can catch our morning bus on time. Secondly, there is one non-working bus in the bus-stops garage area, if company can start that too on a city route only for morning time, than greater people can travel. Kindly look into this matter to resolve it. Yours faithfully, Tina Modi.

Dear sir,

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Kindly look into this matter to resolve it.

Yours faithfully
,

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