Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing, as a citizen in your region, to express my opinion on the generous donation you would spend on our community.
On the one hand, it is beneficial to invest in a sports team for our children to develop lifelong competences. Not only will it contribute to a boost in a child’s self-esteem and confidence, but it will also allow children to practice social interactions and work together to achieve a common goal.
On the other hand, funding for open-air concerts has proven to be an opportunity to relax outdoors. This is because the audience enjoys listening to music in the fresh air rather than in the opera house. Additionally, these events are advantageous for gathering family members or friends to entertain together at the weekends.
In my opinion, I would prefer it if the company spent the money on sponsoring a children’s sports team rather than organizing concerts. Because the benefits of the former exceed those of the latter.
Thank you for your swift cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Kyrillos Gamal
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing, as a citizen in your region, to express my opinion on the generous donation you would spend on our community.
On the one hand, it is beneficial to invest in a sports team for our children to develop lifelong competences. Not
only
will it contribute to a boost in a child’s self-esteem and confidence,
but
it will
also
allow
children to practice social interactions and work together to achieve a common goal.
On the other hand
, funding for open-air concerts has proven to be an opportunity to relax outdoors. This is
because
the audience enjoys listening to music in the fresh air
rather
than in the opera
house
.
Additionally
, these
events
are advantageous for gathering family members or friends to entertain together at the weekends.
In my opinion, I would prefer it if the
company
spent the money on sponsoring a children’s sports team
rather
than organizing concerts.
Because
the benefits of the former exceed those of the latter.
Thank you for your swift cooperation.
Yours
faithfully
,
Kyrillos
Gamal