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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in response to your letter of complaint about the noise from our unit that was sent to me dated 26 December 2021. First, I would like to apologize for any inconvenieces that our event had caused you during our Christmas party. We have celebrated Christmas in our flat along with my relatives, colleagues and friends. With so much excitement we didn't realize that we have created so much noise in the whole building and might affect our neighbors. Kindly accept my sincerest apology for what happened. I have received a warning notice from our real estate about the incident and I personally commited that if such incident happened again, I will voluntarily leave the premises. I promise to be very vigilant in all the gathering that I will hold in the future and ensure that no will will bother with our party. I hope you accept my sincere apology. Sincerely yours, Camela de Guzman
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in response to your letter of complaint about the noise from our unit that was
sent
to me dated 26 December 2021.

First
, I would like to apologize for any
inconvenieces
that our
event
had caused you during our Christmas party. We have celebrated Christmas in our flat along with my relatives, colleagues and friends. With
so
much excitement we didn't realize that we have created
so
much noise in the whole building and might affect our neighbors. Kindly accept my sincerest apology for what happened.

I have received a warning notice from our real estate about the incident and I
personally
commited
that if such incident happened again, I will
voluntarily
leave
the premises. I promise to be
very
vigilant in all the gathering that I will hold in the future and ensure that no
will will
bother with our party.

I
hope you accept my sincere apology.

Sincerely
yours,

Camela
de Guzman
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IELTS letter Globalization is important to society

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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