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Letter to manager for job company offer

Letter to manager for job company offer Mwkna

Dear sir, It was a real pleasure to meet you last week in Rotary club meeting. Your mail regarding the job offer also came as a pleasant surprise. Thank you so much for considering me for working as a senior manager in a company. However, after careful deliberation I have decided to decline this position. As I mentioned in our discussions last week, I am currently working for Delta international and immensely enjoying my sales position there. Now my company has offered me a promotion, which I feel I cannot let go. However, I would like to recommend my friend Dr David Smith as a strong potential candidate. He has an extensive sales background and is currently looking for change. He can be reached on his number is 987653201. Thank you once again for your confidence and offering me an opportunity to work for your organisation. I’m sorry if I have caused you any inconvenience. Your sincerely, Raima Joseph

Dear sir,

It was a real pleasure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you last week in Rotary club meeting. Your mail regarding the job offer also
 came as a pleasant surprise. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for considering me for working as a senior manager in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. However
, after careful deliberation I have decided to decline this position.

As I mentioned in our discussions last week, I am currently
 working for Delta international and immensely
 enjoying my sales position there. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 has offered me a promotion, which I feel I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 go.

However
, I would like to recommend my friend Dr David Smith as a strong potential candidate. He has an extensive sales background and is currently
 looking for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. He can be reached
 on his number is 987653201.

Thank you once again for your confidence and offering me an opportunity to work for your Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
. I’m sorry if I have caused you any inconvenience. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.RamaRAMARIMARPIMA
Raima
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Joseph