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you recently made an online purchase and the product was not the same as the description on the website

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Dear Support Department, I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with an item purchased by me from your official website. I ordered a pair of laces on 12 Jan 2020 with a 20% discount offer. I received my parcel after two days, it was a really inferior experience. The received item is totally different that I saw on your website. I ordered a blue and black color of laces because it's available on clearance, but I got a blue and red pair of laces and the quality is not good as well. I am your regular customer and I ordered numerous items online. This type of incident happened twice a time with me. In order to resolve the issue, I would like you to mail me a pair of black laces as earliest or I can just return the entire package so you can refund in full. I am looking for the resolution as soon as possible to keep my faith in your services. Your sincerely, Sandeep kaur
Dear Support Department,

I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with an item
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purchased
by me from your official website. I ordered a pair of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laces
on 12 Jan 2020 with a 20% discount offer.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
received my parcel after two days, it was a
really
inferior experience. The received item is
totally
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different
that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
on your website. I ordered a blue and black color of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laces
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because
it's available on clearance,
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but
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a blue and red pair of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laces
and the quality is not
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good
as well
.

I am your regular customer and I ordered numerous items online. This type of incident happened twice a time with me.

In order to resolve the issue, I would like you to mail me a pair of black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laces
as earliest or I can
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
return the entire package
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can refund in full.

I am looking for the resolution as
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soon
as possible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my faith in your services.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Sandeep
Possible spelling mistake found.
kaur

IELTS letter you recently made an online purchase and the product was not the same as the description on the website

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  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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