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Dear Jen. I am so happy you decided to come to visit, and that you have finally got your flight! You already said you were coming at the end of June, but what day and time will you arrive exactly? Shall I pick you up at the airport?

Dear Jen. I am so happy you decided to come to visit, and that you have finally got your flight! You already said you were coming at the end of June, but what day and time will you arrive exactly? Shall I pick you up at the airport? yPPLJ
Dear Jen. I am so happy you decided to come to visit, and that you have finally got your flight! You already said you were coming at the end of June, but what day and time will you arrive exactly? Shall I pick you up at the airport? There are some interesting things going on here in the last weekend of June. There is a music festival outside of town, and we could camp there and see lots of bands. On the other hand, on the same weekend, all the museums in the city are offering free admission so we could stay at home and visit them instead.
Dear Jen. I am
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happy you decided to
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come
to visit, and that you have
finally
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got
your flight! You already said you were coming at the
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end
of June,
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but
what day and time will you arrive exactly? Shall I pick you up at the airport? There are
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some
interesting things going on here in the last weekend of June. There is a music festival outside of town, and we could camp there and
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see
lots of bands.
On the other hand
, on the same weekend, all the museums in the city are offering free admission
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so
we could stay at home and visit them
instead
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IELTS letter Dear Jen. I am so happy you decided to come to visit, and that you have finally got your flight! You already said you were coming at the end of June, but what day and time will you arrive exactly? Shall I pick you up at the airport?

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108 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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